My Did you ever poem

Malo e lelei bloggers ,

Yesterday Mrs Butler came and worked with us . We wrote our own poem and it was called
Did you ever ?  I wrote about going on a roller coaster and how creepy it was and people 

screaming. We had to use verbs in our writing and that was also our focus in are writing.
Here is my poem and have fun reading it...

                                                 Did you ever on a roller coast ?
                                                         heart pounding fast
                                                         people screaming
                                                         eyes wide open
                                                                Try it!